I’ve been playing with poetry recently, and since its national poetry day I’m going to pop this one up.
I had written it for a specific competition, but my executive function issues got in the way, and I ended up missing the deadline. Ah well.
It’s an attempt at a Welsh style called a Cynghanedd (Harmony). English doesn’t lend itself well to the form, which is all about mirroring consonant sounds, but I love trying it.
This particular poem is a Cynghanedd Sain (a sound harmony). It’s not perfect, I’ve kept to the spirit of the rules, but bending rules is a huge part of my coping mechanisms!
Each line is broken into three sections, the first must rhyme with the second, the second’s consonants must appear in the same order in the third (but mustn’t rhyme). I find that structure can often push you into new ways of thinking.
Hope you don’t mind my poetic tangent!
Silence
A cacophony of phoney feign
Silence fell, a hell, a haul
Of buzzing, humming, homonyming,
Of croaking, poking, pecking
Of bleating, meeting, mating.
My feet in rivers, slicing shivers, sluicing shy verges.
Lips loose and held, a tongueless weld, tangled, I swallow
Silence batters and clatters. Cultures
Caught in parallel, increasing swell, Encroaching its will
On my emptiness. My moment’s less minimised silence.
Silence. I have never heard a silent herd, slain throats,
A quest for peace, unslayable beast, No syllable boasts
Sleeker vacuum, a perfect plume, pure facet palmed.
With feet asplash, fish flash, fresh flesh.
I lie back, arms slack, roaming slaked.
Winds steal words, steal calling birds, still clinging breeds
Empty vases, passes, peace in pieces.
Bravo! You really got the feel of cynghanedd there. Loved it. Are you a Welsh speaker? I learned it at school and later in adult ed classes before I moved to France.
Hwyl fawr 🙂
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I am! Diolch yn fawr. Love the sound of cynghanedd. I always remember first hearing one at school and being blown away.
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Beautiful imagery visual and aural. Keep going, poetry is making the mundane evocative and I think you achieve that, loved the words, they take you straight to the hills
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Thank you! The hills is where I want to take you 🙂
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Wow that’s so cool!
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Thanks 🙂
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Oh wow!! 👌🏻
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